Hi Aaron, I have taken numerous speech classes in my time at UF and have found that the best way to attract your audience is to have a hook at the beginning of the speech. I think you did a great job of hooking people into your speech and getting them to listen. Your speech was very informative and convincing; if I were an investor I would automatically buy into your plan.
You did a great job at describing what your product solves and where the need for this product lies. It was nice that you were standing up in this video and shows some enthusiasm for the product. Overall, I think you did a great job with your pitch. Your product is one that will reach a very large audience.
This is a great product. A large majority of people are very connected to their phones so I can see many people needing or wanting this product. I like that this product can recharge your phone while recharging itself. Great job on the pitch. You were able to promote your product and inform the customer what it is and how it works.
Aaron, I do find myself using my phone non stop and quickly draining the battery multiple times throughout the day. Right now, I bring my charger to work in order to combat this problem but sometimes I forget it at home or at work then I don’t have a charger while I am there or when I return home. I really think that your battery idea would be a huge success that many people would use.
Hi Aaron,
ReplyDeleteI have taken numerous speech classes in my time at UF and have found that the best way to attract your audience is to have a hook at the beginning of the speech. I think you did a great job of hooking people into your speech and getting them to listen. Your speech was very informative and convincing; if I were an investor I would automatically buy into your plan.
Aaron,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job at describing what your product solves and where the need for this product lies. It was nice that you were standing up in this video and shows some enthusiasm for the product. Overall, I think you did a great job with your pitch. Your product is one that will reach a very large audience.
This is a great product. A large majority of people are very connected to their phones so I can see many people needing or wanting this product. I like that this product can recharge your phone while recharging itself. Great job on the pitch. You were able to promote your product and inform the customer what it is and how it works.
ReplyDeleteAaron,
ReplyDeleteI do find myself using my phone non stop and quickly draining the battery multiple times throughout the day. Right now, I bring my charger to work in order to combat this problem but sometimes I forget it at home or at work then I don’t have a charger while I am there or when I return home. I really think that your battery idea would be a huge success that many people would use.